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Not awake
Not asleep
I float along
I start to weep

It’s dark outside
It’s kind of cold
So very quite
So very old

The same things
The same days
The same feelings
The same ways

Not right now
Not tonight
I hate this place
I hate this fight

It’s dark inside
It’s a metaphor
So very lame
So very done before

The same things
The same days
The same feelings
The same ways
I was awake and had a feeling I needed to write I did in just a few minutes sorry if it's no good it's my first foray into poetry in quite some time.
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kittykat0525's avatar
must fav this... i love it :clap: